Your letter is yet another impressive one. One thing, in your 3rd paragraph, though you did mention briefly about the projects you have done, perhaps it might be good if you can substantiate with an example or so?
I see quite a few changes to your application letter! -thumbs up- I really think your current one is much better and much more persuasive as you've given very legitimate examples of what made you motivated to work hard in the biomedical sciences sector.
Good that you align your talents and past experiences closely to what the job is looking for, this makes your application letter even more convincing!
Hi Caifang,
ReplyDeleteYour letter is yet another impressive one. One thing, in your 3rd paragraph, though you did mention briefly about the projects you have done, perhaps it might be good if you can substantiate with an example or so?
Goodluck on your application!
Hey Caifang!
ReplyDeleteI see quite a few changes to your application letter! -thumbs up- I really think your current one is much better and much more persuasive as you've given very legitimate examples of what made you motivated to work hard in the biomedical sciences sector.
Good that you align your talents and past experiences closely to what the job is looking for, this makes your application letter even more convincing!
Good job overall friend! :)